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Good start ! I’d loke to know more on the point you brought up. what kind of things have American school better? what let them apart ?  what kind of things can you bring good to Kuwait when you graduate? what,specialieaty have you encountered in America that you had to deal with and how did you ? what advantages will this give you ?

 

 

add more details to the paragraphs answering these quistions . it has to be four pages