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FOr Kim

this my note about my research you should do the change >>>>>and i need the abstract mor argument and have thieses at the end 

> Organigaticn araund a qusotion that is debatable 

>topic sentenses and transitions that make the paregraphs connect togther 

>A question presented at the beginning of ur paper 

>one central topic (you may have too many variab pieces right now)

>men and women paticipationg in class:

_psychology?

_drug use ?

_homosexuality?

thanks a lot