Explain why the following sentences are inappropriate examples of thematic statements. pride goes before fall, create an improved version

Explain why the following sentences are inappropriate examples of thematic statements. pride goes before fall, create an improved version
 
Do you need a similar assignment done for you from scratch? We have qualified writers to help you. We assure you an A+ quality paper that is free from plagiarism. Order now for an Amazing Discount!
Use Discount Code "Newclient" for a 15% Discount!

NB: We do not resell papers. Upon ordering, we do an original paper exclusively for you.